Wow! You really are a brilliant poet, aren't you?

Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ?


It's free and every nitwit such as myself who enters gets a small gift

but someone like you might win one of their $10 000 or $100 000 prizes.

actually i didnt lose your sn

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I smiled across the room, embarrassed rogue
through sheets of smoke.
Her stare burned my smile to ash.

I miss you.

if you want, my e-mail address is:

levendredi@gmail.com

I lost your screen name.

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I smiled across the room, embarrassed rogue
through sheets of smoke.
Her stare burned my smile to ash.

my name is john
but thanks : )

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Came across your work a while ago, havent bin' on DA in ages. Revisited 'The Youth', still makes me grin.
Oh damn kid, Charlie you've gon' got y'rself in shit.
Keep up the great work.

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"...what Peace there may be in Silence."
4 out of 5 doctors agree. Shut up.

howdy.

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my enemy said to me, "love your enemy."
and i obeyed him and loved myself. gibran

hulloa

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hello.

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There once was a soul, he's a jolly old soul, a jolly old soul named Lago...

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brilliant collection. it's exciting to find worthy poets around here.

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They don't sleep anymore on the beach.

It's refreshing to see that some people outt here work hard on their writings beyond the point of orginial draft. Your writing revealsa lt of thought and depth that is usally accompaniedby revision and contemplating. Good work!

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Quidquid latine dictum sit, altum viditur.

Or 'Whatever is said in Latin sounds profound.'

you write lovely things, its nice to find something like your journal, its all very chaotic and happy in the same time, just what i want to be, come visit me i want to more of you ^.^;;

you have some fresh stuff here.

the highlights:
Blues Chant (simply amazing.)
The Youth (no wonder it made daily deviantion, its absolutely brilliant. the voice is so specific and every detail fits together wonderfully.)
Everyone Loves Everyone (a little cliche, but nice)
Leaving The Party Early

i love the tributes to Georgia and your rare but strong rhymes. no one seems to write love poems to their hometowns anymore these days. i commend you. check out some of my work, you might enjoy it.

- margaret

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ars longa. vita brevis.

To me, your poetry is a breath of fresh air and some of the most inspiring work I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I can only hope two things:
1. That more people get the privilege of viewing your work and soaking it in. (DD should help with that a bit but the thought remains all the same)
and
2. That by watching you I will have the opprotunity to experience more of your wonderful work.
Le'chájim,
~jt

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Your poetry is amazing. I rarely find poems that really capture my attention and describe emotions or tell stories so vivadly that I feel like I'm a part of them, but your work pulls me in.

keep it up, i'm going to be watching you

Excuse me! Your use of imagery is very effective and I particularly enjoy your use of rhythm.

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the casting of this pebble from your hand alters the center of gravity of the universe

Beautiful writing; honest and elegant. Your use of I particularly enjoy your use of rhythm.

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the casting of this pebble from your hand alters the center of gravity of the universe

You are BRILLIANT sir.

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"When angry, count to a hundred. When very angry, swear."
--Mark Twain

you have an amazing way with words, and a real passion [for apparant carelessness] that really comes through every word you write. thus far i've only read a few of your pieces, but they made me feel like nothing mattered ... as all good poetry should.

you have incredible talent, and i look forward to reading more of your work.

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"isn't it a pity how we take each other's love without thinking anymore ... "
-George Harrison

Dude luv the name
i love to write poetry too

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i am nobody and nobodys perfect therefore i am perfect

Why be difficult when with a bit of effort you can be impossible

i missed
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Bring it on

just wanted to say i enjoy reading your poetry. you offer lots of insight, it keeps me coming back. cheers. rach

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rachael

Well. You've definitely got raw talent. Read everything. Enjoyed reading everything. Hope you continue to find creative inspirations.

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Modest Mouse fan? Well, that explains everything. Congratulations on a great poem being featured.

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I had to watch you, your imagery in your poems is so vivid! I may not have anything useful to say for your writing talent surpases my own, but I'll still be watching.

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